Essay 1 the person who i admire

The Person Who I admire

  My brother is the person who I admire the most. His name is Byambadorj. When the time comes for help, he is always there for me. Not only he is reliable but kind and demanding. From the time I've been living he's been a great model to copy. If I challenge my skills he's always ready like some wall to overcome... His life can be a good example of a person who has suffered a lot, but never asked for help as asking for help was symbol of weakness for him. He's 3 years older than me.
After all I know him since I was born, but I’ve understand him during last 5 or 6 years. He always advices me  that “Don’t feel helpless in life and laziness is not something you inherit, it's one of your thousands of reasons to give up on some work, sleep or something.
   He said this to me when I was in 7th grade.  And I thought he just wanted me to do his houseworks. But I was completely wrong!!! Now I figured out the meaning of the word... and working my hardest to keep up with him.
Last year he took the IELTS exam and took 7 points out of 9. Now He is in Finland to study more and more. Sometimes I get a feeling that I'll never be able to reach him.  But I'll never give up on something. Those are the things I learned from my brother. 
Those who can drive you to you ambition, who can lead you to light, whom you can trust most..   Those people are the ones.
Finally, the person you admire doesn't have to be yout blood relatives or your friends. Remember that!!!
Love you brother...